12-P2-31 - Constructive Criticism From Our Presentation

Following the presentation of our planning we we're given a lot of constructive feedback, one of which being, the successful choice of music style in our production, for example "Mad World by Gary Jules" These sorts of songs will directly contrast the narrative and be "Contrapuntal", Another piece of feedback we received is that although we knew exactly what we wanted to portray verbally, in our blog work we used basic descriptions and lacked detail, we intend to fix the blogs we feel that we're applicable to this feedback. We we're also told to consider a production title for our opening sequence, after group discussions we have concluded on "Retribution" this instantly gives a potential viewer an insight into the films narrative, Finally we were told to consider in more depth the location of our filming, we knew we required a simple, box room, however had not discussed factors such as lighting control or availability.

In Conclusion, we have taken a lot of constructive criticism and aim to use it to build upon our existing work and hopefully improve overall grading.

Joe, Laura, Lily, Esther,Tom